Premise • Update Notes

This is a post that's a little less structured than the rest, as my mind is a little preoccupied but the information is still here. it is only a small adjustment.

Possible behavioural updated

'Turtle' is not as carnivorous, but omnivorous

instead is reaching for the grass near the squid

eating smaller fish than the squid

but still seems like a threat

Tug of war over some grass?

reaching for a fish near the squid to startle it?

Multimouth still a predator

They're unsettling

SO

don't use them often, like the Mario eels (the creepy ones)

Froths can be overly motherly, trying to feed them food they don’t eat

As well as being ‘protection’

Striders are the ‘teachers'; they are in charge, big and wandering.
but mainly non-violent

Keep scene from last time relatively the same but make them explosive berries

and the squid very resilient

so it just puffs up when it eats the plant which then scared the turtle,

leaving it unharmed.

it's an unexpected effect as we could see a smaller fish eat it and swim off,
it could make the ‘escape’ seem lucky.

It should result in a build-up of tension, and a possible point of playing about with audio to come up with a humorous bubbly noise for when it deflates back to normal.

 

Explosive berries?

or a different sort of food

could it just be a reaction from only the squid eating them